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Implement Revisions & Finalize Manuscript

⏱ 9–6 months before release

What You'll Do

Work through your editor's notes and tracked changes carefully. Accept or reject each edit intentionally, polish dialogue for flow and voice consistency, and ensure your formatting is clean and ready for the next step.

Step-by-Step Process

Step 1: Read the Editorial Letter First

Before diving into tracked changes, read your editor's editorial letter from start to finish. This gives you the big picture of:

  • Recurring patterns or issues
  • Strengths in your writing
  • Areas needing the most attention
  • Overall feedback on pacing, voice, and consistency

Make notes on key themes. This helps you understand the "why" behind specific edits when you review them.

Step 2: Review Tracked Changes Carefully

Do not click "Accept All." Go through each edit individually and decide whether to accept or reject it.

Questions to ask yourself:

  • Does this edit improve clarity or flow?
  • Does it maintain my character's voice?
  • Is this grammatically correct but changes my intended meaning?
  • If I disagree, is there a compromise that works better?

💡 How to Handle Disagreements

If you disagree with an edit, don't automatically reject it—ask yourself why the editor suggested it. Often there's an underlying issue (unclear wording, awkward phrasing) that you can fix in a different way. You might keep your original sentence but reword it slightly for better clarity.

Step 3: Polish Dialogue

Dialogue often needs extra attention during revisions. Focus on:

  • Voice consistency: Does each character sound distinct and true to themselves?
  • Natural flow: Read dialogue aloud—does it sound like real speech?
  • Dialogue tags: Use "said" most of the time; avoid overusing adverbs ("she said nervously")
  • Subtext: Are characters saying what they mean, or is there tension beneath the words?

🎭 Read Aloud Technique

Read your dialogue out loud. If you stumble over words or a line sounds stiff, rewrite it. Dialogue should feel conversational, not formal or stilted.

Step 4: Check Formatting Consistency

Clean up your manuscript formatting before sending it to a formatter. This makes their job easier and reduces costly revisions.

✅ Formatting Checklist

  • Remove double spaces after periods (should be single space)
  • Ensure all chapter headings use the same style (e.g., Heading 1 or Heading 2)
  • Remove extra paragraph breaks between paragraphs (should be only one)
  • Check that scene breaks are consistent throughout (e.g., always use *** or ~*~)
  • Ensure indents are consistent (use tab or paragraph formatting, not manual spaces)
  • Use one clear font throughout (Times New Roman, Garamond, or similar at 12pt)
  • Verify smart quotes are used (" ") not straight quotes (" ")
  • Check for stray italics, bold, or underline formatting that shouldn't be there

Step 5: Final Quality Check

Before saving your final manuscript, do one last pass:

✅ Spelling & Grammar

Run your final proof through Word's spell check or tools like Grammarly or ProWritingAid to catch small errors your editor might have missed.

✅ Scene Breaks

Make sure all scene breaks are clearly marked with a consistent symbol:

  • Good options: *** or ~*~ or • • •
  • Don't rely on blank lines alone—they can disappear during formatting

✅ Chapter Consistency

Check that:

  • All chapter numbers/titles follow the same format
  • Chapters are clearly marked (Chapter 1, Chapter One, etc.)
  • No duplicate chapter numbers or missing chapters

✅ Front & Back Matter Order

Confirm your manuscript includes these sections in the correct order:

  1. Title Page
  2. Copyright Page
  3. Dedication (optional)
  4. Acknowledgements (optional, or place at back)
  5. Table of Contents (optional for fiction)
  6. Chapter 1 (start of story)
  7. ... (rest of your book)
  8. The End
  9. Author Note (optional)
  10. Acknowledgements (if not at front)
  11. About the Author
  12. Preview of Next Book (optional)

Step 6: Save Your Final Version

Once satisfied, save your manuscript with a clear, final name:

  • Good example: Born_from_the_Broken_FINAL.docx
  • Include the date: Born_from_the_Broken_FINAL_2025-01-15.docx

Save it in your /Manuscript/Final Versions/ folder and back it up to your cloud storage immediately.

🔒 Protect Your Final Version

After saving your final manuscript, make a backup copy and mark it as read-only or save a PDF version. This prevents accidental edits after you've declared the manuscript "done."

Common Revision Mistakes to Avoid

❌ Accepting All Edits Without Review

Your editor's job is to suggest—yours is to decide. Some edits might change your character's voice or your intended meaning. Always review individually.

❌ Over-Editing

At some point, you need to stop revising and call it done. If you've addressed your editor's feedback and polished the manuscript, resist the urge to keep tweaking forever. Perfectionism can prevent you from publishing.

❌ Ignoring Recurring Issues

If your editor points out a pattern (overuse of certain words, weak dialogue tags, pacing issues), don't just fix individual instances—understand the root cause and correct it throughout.

❌ Forgetting to Save Versions

Before making major changes, save a copy of your manuscript with a version number (e.g., Draft_3.docx) so you can revert if needed.

Tools to Help with Revisions

Grammarly

Free and premium versions available. Catches grammar errors, awkward phrasing, and overused words. Install the Word plugin for in-document suggestions.

Visit Grammarly

ProWritingAid

Comprehensive editing tool with reports on pacing, readability, overused words, clichés, and more. Integrates with Word and Google Docs.

Visit ProWritingAid

AutoCrit

Specifically designed for fiction writers. Analyzes dialogue, pacing, repetition, and compares your manuscript to published books in your genre.

Visit AutoCrit

When Are You Done?

You're ready to move to the next phase when:

  • ✅ All tracked changes have been reviewed and resolved
  • ✅ Dialogue flows naturally when read aloud
  • ✅ Formatting is clean and consistent
  • ✅ You've addressed all major concerns from the editorial letter
  • ✅ The manuscript reads smoothly from beginning to end
  • ✅ You feel confident in the quality of your work

✨ Final Thought

"Done is better than perfect." At some point, you need to trust your work and move forward. If you've worked with a professional editor and addressed their feedback thoughtfully, your manuscript is ready for formatting and proofreading.

🔗 Helpful Tools

→ Grammarly → ProWritingAid → AutoCrit → Hemingway Editor (checks readability)

✅ Once your manuscript is polished and saved as a final version, mark this task complete!

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